I was sitting on a big bunch of cars on a boat in the middle of the sea it was a bit rocky I felt the cars tipping back and fourth. I was nearly at shore when I felt the boat tip to the left, then rapidly to the left I saw a the bank of the ocean. There were a few big waves, then I heard one of the cars crashing off and ripping the metal. I got closer to the bank when I rapidly hit the bank I leaped of fast then all the cars were gone beneath.
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I liked how you kept me wanting for more, it also was really good how it was like a show not tell, I really wish that there where more information.